克服薄弱环节收获哈佛大学offer

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学生背景：

Name: J.姓名：J.同学

School: US Boarding School学校：美国某寄宿高中

Accepted School：Harvard University 录取学校：哈佛大学

GPA: 3.9/4.0

TOEFL: NA

SAT: 2360

SAT II SAT:

Biology-E 770 生物：770

Chemistry 730 and 720化学：730和720

Latin 730 拉丁语：730

Physics 750 物理：750

Math Level II 800 数学II：800

Activities:活动包括：

1) Raised money annually for hospitals.

每年为医院筹集资金

2) Therapeutic skating instructor for children with various mental and physical disabilities (blindness, autism) skating

作为有心理和生理障碍的(如失明,自闭症)儿童的滑冰治疗教练

3) Regional Novice Ladies Bronze Medalist

Regional Novice Ladies铜牌

3) Intermediate Ladies Champion

Intermediate Ladies冠军

5) Student Chair

学生主席

6) Current Events Club Head

实事俱乐部负责人

7) Tour Guide

导游

8) Tutors sciences to younger students

低年级学生的导师

9) Server at homeless shelter for women and children

在收容所为妇女和儿童服务

10) Internship at MIT

在MIT实习

11) Tutored children between 5 and 10 on literacy and math

辅导5-10名孩子的识字和数学

12) Photography Assistant.

摄影助理

导师点评：

JL's case demonstrates how Prestige Only supports and successfully mentors high level cases with needs in both Consulting and Test Preparation. Our experienced consultants are backed by a strong academy team, so J was able to receive SAT coaching in addition to the consulting that resulted in her acceptance to Harvard.

J同学的案例是PO指导的成功案例的典型。我们经验丰富的顾问背后有着强大的学术团队的支持，所以J同学除咨询外，能够得到SAT的训练，进而被哈佛大学录取。

J signed a Platinum package in the 2nd semester of her Junior year. Though her initial SAT test was only a 2100, she was able to raise this score to a 2360 through 6 months of group and 1-on-1 classes with our Academy team. Furthermore, because of the closeness and information sharing between our Academy and Consulting teams, J's Senior Consultant was also able to focus on her weaknesses in terms of Critical Reading and Grammar when mentoring her through our Reading and Writing Development curriculum. This double-pronged approach--combined with J's work ethic--allowed her to improve her SAT score to one that would be competitive when applying to Top 10 schools.

J同学是在11年第二学期签订的时铂金套餐。虽然初始SAT成绩只有2100，在我们学术团队的1对1辅导后，6个月内成绩提高到2360。而且，因为我们团队紧密的信息共享，J同学的高级顾问老师可以将学生的重点放在薄弱项阅读和语法项。通过我们团队的和学生的共同合作，J同学的SAT进步很快，在申请TOP10学校时，更有竞争力。

J also received expert mentorship to help her grow into leadership roles so that she could display to colleges that she was taking on more responsibility year after year. This was through a combination of coaching the student on how to develop relationships with club sponsors and peers so that she could be appointed or voted to be the leader in the club. Hence, she eventually became Student Chair as well as the Head of Current Events.

J同学也得到了提升领导力的帮助。通过指导如何跟俱乐部赞助商和志愿者建立关系，使得她能在俱乐部竞选时脱颖而出。她当上了学生会主席和时事俱乐部的会长。

For top students such as J who have stellar and impressive profiles, they tend to be too over confident and as a result do not spend the time necessary brainstorming, editing, and revising their personal statements and supplemental essays. However, with our guidance and coaching, we were able to develop a very strong hook for her PS. Then she tied in the major theme within her PS to her supplemental essays by conveying and extending this theme of understanding the self and the drive for purpose and meaning in family and community.

对于像J同学这样材料背景很好的学生，他们一般都很自信，他们往往不会花很多时间在个人陈述和短文的头脑风暴，措辞和修改润色上。在我们的指导下，她的PS变得非常有吸引力。她将所选专业与PS与其他补充论文的主题进行结合和延展说明。

Market Differentiator 市场优势

Strong Team of Foreign Senior Consultants Graduating from Top 30 US Universities毕业于美国Top30名校的高级顾问团队

PO stands out because our mentorship process is based off of these values which our senior consultants have all experienced firsthand, which allows us to fully prepare our students to not only gain acceptance to university but also to successfully integrate and succeed.

PO的著名在于我们的指导过程的价值，我们的资深顾问的亲身经验，使我们可以充分帮学生做足准备，学生收获的不只是大学的录取，更是人生的成功。

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