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个人陈述写作指导之社会公益型发展方向.

2017/07/21 03:17:30 编辑: 浏览次数:290 移动端

  我们在前面的个人陈述写作指导总述中谈到,按照申请者的发展方向分有一类是社会公益型,下面我来谈一下这一类型的个陈述写作指导。在我们的申请者中存在着这么一个人群,他们的理想的实现不是为了个人,而是为了更广泛的群体,所以我们称之为社会公益型。

  下面请看这一类型的申请者是如何去构建自己的PS的框架的:

  【范例】

  开头:

  从一粒种子到一棵树,那只是个人梦想的实现,而从一个树变成一片树林或者森林那才是人生真正的价值!让更多的人能享受翱翔于蓝天的自由和幸福!那是我的梦!为此我将付出我的一生!

  (From a seed to a tree, it is just the realization of a personal dream, but evolvement from a tree to woods even a forest is the true value of life! It is my dream to enable more people to enjoy the freedom and happiness of flying in the blue sky! I will dedicate my life to it!)

  18岁时我已经成长为一名获得省级奖项,熟练制作,自由操纵航模的高手,但是那仅仅是个人的实现,我不满足于此,我创建了航模队,希望带领更多的人实践航空梦,但是在哈飞研制复合材料的经历却让我清楚地看到要让更多的人实现航空梦,我要做的应该是在对复合材料研究基础上探索新的复合材料类型和成型工艺。并希望基于此实现复合材料的快速设计和快速成型,实现复合材料的从非承力件向半承力件、完全承力件的过渡。最大限度的降低制造成本。将其应用在民用领域以实现飞机的平民化和个性化。

  (As young as eighteen years old, I had already grown into a master who could adroitly make and freely navigate aeromodels and a winner of a provincial-level award. But that was merely my personal achievement, and I was not satisfied with that. So I founded an aeromodelling team of my own, hoping to lead more people to practise their aviation dreams. However, the experience I gained in developing the composite materials in Harbin Aircraft Industry (Group) Ltd. made me realize that what I should do was to explore new types of composite materials and molding technique based on research on composite materials. What’s more, I also hope to realize rapid designing and molding, and realize the transition of the composite materials from non-bearing force pieces to half-bearing force pieces and then bearing forces pieces so as to reduce the manufacturing cost to the lowest level Thus the composite materials can be applied to civil fields to make aircrafts individual and affordable by the common people.)

  正文:

  Why aeromodels:代替我飞翔!从一粒种子到一棵树。

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