SAT语法句子改错例题详解(4).

36. Some of the classes taught in American classrooms are interpretations of lessons used worldwide,particularly those in European history. classroom,particularly in European history,are interpreations of lessons used worldwide. 点评：注意指代对象 37．Joann,the newest student at Leon Blum high school,has been portrayed as the brightest student and also the most unruly of them. the brightest and yet the most unruly of students. 点评：记住吧。。。the brightest and yet the most unruly of students，后面还有一道关于老虎的题也差不多。 38．Ann’s parents explained that she was promoted to hear journalist for the reason that her articcles were mindful always for both side of the issue. because her articles were always mindful of both sides of the issues 点评：表原因最好还是用简洁的表达方法，如“because”，“since”等单个词而不是如“for the reason that”等结构。简洁 39．（常考题：转折）Many wealthy taxpayers pay less than ten percent of their annual incomes to the government,some middle-income taxpayers pay a much larger percentage annually. Although many wealthy taxpayers pay 点评：转折句，富人少给，较穷人多给，故用“虽然。。。但是。。。”SAT题中很多都谈到这种“不公平”现象。改的时候一般在前就用Although，在后就用yet。（和那个非洲人和美国人收入题类似） 40. OW was almost as brilliant a novelist as he was at writing plays. almost as brilliant a novelist as he was a playwright 点评：并列结构，故前后都因该用职业（名词）。所以说要考虑对比/类比双方的一致性。 41．Examining the catalogue,the phrase “while supplies last” and “get it while it’s hot” are designed to encourage consumers to order the product immeidately. one sees that the phrase 点评：注意动作的执行者。Examing后面必须对应一个能去Exam的主语。 42．In professional soccer,players kick the ball sharply and accurately;however in other sports their technique is not quite so fective. Right! 点评：呵呵，每一行都有每一行的门道。转折关系用转折词。 43．The changing color of autumn leaves has a unique fascination for those people which have an understanding of life-cycles in them.. who see the life cycles in them. 点评： “see”也有“理解”的意思,直接用动词更简洁。同时，修饰“people”用who而不用which。 44．It was primarily when I visited the seashore that I felt nostalgic for my childhood home,growing up on a small island. as I had grown up on a small island 点评：后面的部分是说明自己童年的情况而不是修饰home的。 45．Bore 1988,the CBD included 153 menbers,none of the member were women. members,none of whom were women. 点评：原句run-on了，所以后面不能是一个完整句子。同时“none of 一群对象”后面谓语用复数。 46．Although talent may be a crucial element on the road to fame,it will be difficult to get very far without a highly developed work ethic. Right! 点评：正确！这个句子前面出现过，不过考察方向不同。这种句式“Although…is important”，后面常用“it is…to…”不用比较级，除非有对照物。 47．The DOS argued that although the U’s professors have raised students’ interest in continuing in academic study,the failure is in their not preparing the students for the real word outside of textbooks and caculators. they have failed to prepare 点评： 有Although表转折的句子转折之间后面的一般和前面的句式一样，时态相同（haver raised 与 have failed）